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Early Islamic Civilisation

Posted by Anonymous on November 29, 2017

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Suspense Writing

In class we have been learning how to write a suspense story. Writing a suspense story is very easy. It should appeal to the audience's feeling, have the use of ellipses and it should have short and snappy sentences. This is my story:

Flying Lesson

Flying Lesson “Aiiiiii! Am I flying mummy ducky? ! ” I shouted, “ Um, flap your wings honey,” said mummy. I saw mummy waiting for me and my 99 more siblings that had their turn to try and fly. When I came down I heard a crack, I thought I broke my leg. Mummy took me to Nurse Piggy-Wiggy and Nurse Piggy-Wiggy said I was fine. Mum said I deserved a whole cricket by myself because I tried to fly. I knew I was the better than the others, at first. Dang! I was wrong. Next thing I knew mum gave all of my other 99 siblings a cricket to eat by themselves. We all smelt icky and sticky too. “MMMM, best meal ever” I shouted.

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